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Beach Chair ------------------------------------------ Break me the sunset in a cup; a splendid notion. Thoughts aside as I reside in my beach chair by the ocean. Archaic is the paper news; ...

So, first thoughts are, don't use "shining" so much (it's in the title, first stanza, and second stanza; try to cut out one of those), but otherwise this is an ...

This is in response to a challenge I received after writing a fairly depressing poem. I had to write a poem about joie de vivre, which after a quick google, ...

Clever and fun, you managed to animate even the words. I laughed the whole way through.

Oh... my.. GOD. Let me just start by saying, the length of this poem was daunting at first, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop! I was literally (I ...

Its not that great, but its what I came up with. Trash it, hate it, burn it, shoot it. Then tell me how to fix it. --------------------------------------- I walk among ...

Fifth Avenue ------------------------------------------------------- The crisp leaf floated down. The weather; cruel and pretty. Wind lifted and twisted its path as it paled against the city. I pulled

A Drinking Song Wine comes in at the mouth And love comes in at the eye; That's all we shall know for truth Before we grow old and die. I ...

Sounds like advertising to me. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt though! :P Congratz! I read the back and it sounds interesting. How many "no"s did it take ...

Well let me just start off by saying I commend you on your theme. My religious themed poems always turn out like rubbish, but this is quite good and written ...

Hello there There was a lot going on in my head as I read this. I even held my throat a couple of times. Good job on this one. I ...

:) This a brilliant and snappy portrayle of suicide, which most people always go on to describe their rubbish lives and how they are sad about doing it, but the ...

I like it. It's different. A quick poem about suicide written perfectly... and sort of in a happy way. Well, not really happy but it doesn't make you sad. Just ...

I really liked this! I loved the pacing and the weird narrator who instructs on how to be dead but seems to almost be tricking and manipulating the listener who ...

Love Life ------------------------------------------------------ I eased the shiny bullet into the waiting gun. I cocked it with one sudden motion, then held it in my hand. I thrust it into my ...