inkwell

My heart dwells on the pain and sorrow The hurt of not knowing what will come tomorrow The lust and love you put me through And not knowing if what ...

Hey, inkwell! I love your voice in this story--it's kind of wry, kind of dry. Not a romance novel voice by any other name, so I'm excited to read it. ...

Cool poem! I like the concept, I write about it as well. Imagery was fantastic, the ink and the "crimson margin", "colorless marble". Really epic description. The structure is pleasing ...

I really liked the first one! Beautiful tree and wonderfully lit. The second picture I'm note sure. I would LOVE to see it in a higher resolution, it would make ...

I liked your poem, it was very emotional. An interesting mix of hope and desperation. I would recommend restructuring it into more lines with less length, add some punctuation and ...

Forward: In my original draft, I used a different font to distinguish a different narrator. Since there is only one font on YWS I simply used a quote square. CHAPTER ...

Wow, thanks for sharing that poem, it was truly beautiful and inspiring. Considering the context I think it's an excellent poem. I'm willing to bet everyone who heard it really ...

Rhyme scheme is actually a device used to ENHANCE poetry and can be far more complex than the elementary way you presented it, most people have this misunderstood. In regards ...

Don't read other people's posts before your criticism, kingolions, it gives you tunnel-vision! :P (More depth in my PM) :)

I could have, and I thought about that. I intentionally wanted to make it sort of abrupt, as though the narrator paused or hesitated. I think I can get away ...

I don't know if you've read my PM yet Snoink, but one thing I just want to say that I did not mention was that part of what I DO ...

You tease me with the blur. It looks as though it would be very nice and detailed and pretty if only you could take a clearer photo or use a ...

I'm not usually a poet but I was inspired. This is based on a very close friend of mine and it is the product of late night insomnia, I'd love ...

I love this! Did you construct it as well as decorate it? Maybe if you feel like going over the top you could paint some water colors where it's looking ...

Many times I have heard before, that sound which makes me shiver. It is like a chilling wind, that rushes down my spine. Love this stanza. :) It is a ...