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FYI: I put it on photobucket with a link. It should work now... lol! @Lava I'm not really bothered by the first two things you mentioned, I think the background ...

Oh no, Inkwell! The attachment went away! Seriously, it says the attached file doesn't exist anymore. I'd love to review it when (or if) you get it back -- just ...

OK so cool assignment. I had to do this once and wrote a satirical parody of Genesis. It didn't blow over well and I got a zero... I'm sure you, ...

A black and white still life. Part of my attempt to start learning photography. :) Sorry for problems, I just used photobucket this is link. :)

A strict experiment of stream of consciousness written recently after an outburst of dialogue and thought. A guilt trip from here to - woken up in the climax of a ...

You will never guess when/where I wrote this poem. Homeroom By Romance Otaku These are the days I wish I could just leave. Alright, cool line . Why is everyone ...

Capitalize seasons, make "life less" "lifeless". Overall a sweet poem, the ending was nice.

I'll consider reading when the title is changed to "Andrew and I".

This is a poem i wrote for English, but i thought that i'd post it. I'm not sure what type of poem it is. It might be free verse, i ...

The desperate ends of the thin pages shrivel like a flower at the end of its bloom. The airplane hurtles, again, again, replay. They burn. The inky inscriptions of salaam ...

OK, well first off, I think that this poem could have taken it one step farther and written the poem in consideration of a fish's lack of self awareness. For ...

Thanks everyone! I EXTREMELY appreciate the constructive criticism and generous praise. :) I will do my best to improve.

Thanks for all the comments/crits! I agree with some stuff and not with others. Probabaly won't change the poem though. The days weren't meant to be a 100% rigid paralel ...

Since you've already been heavily reviewed I'm just going to applaud your well polished poem by saying it's original, heavenly descriptive, and draws very well from Greco-Roman mythology/history. The

Please keep comments considerate! :) I don't quite like this. You're using Christian imagery to evoke an erotic nature except... there is nothing Christian about this. Which makes it really ...