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Thanks everyone! I'm looking forward to it Monica! :)

Thank you Jenthura and Apple. What am I trying to do? Well I guess I'm trying to show some part of my life in the photo, or some part of ...

Welcome to YWS! I love this little chunk of prose! Is it stream of conscious? I like the pacing and of it and the ending is really interesting and provoking. ...

The layout was very intentional actually. I'm relatively new to photography as a medium and am yet to experiment with film. Digital is just cheaper and more convenient for me ...

Those are great sketches! In the second sketch though the guy's face on the left looks weird, kind of squeezed. Are you planning on creating a cartoon/comic?

I know the title's kinda corny... :p You can zoom in if you if you want too.

I agree with Noelle that you should fix the contradiction. I also think that you should remove, "however you are not" since I think the reader can pretty much figure ...

I like the minimal two lines at the center but the squiggles are silly. Even if you are talking about string theory and are forming a picture, it should be ...

This is a lovely poem! I was swept away by its cheery insouciance (word of the day!) and pure escapism. Giving each other "the ultimate high" seemed a little out ...

You real have a knack for poetry, don't you? The minimalism, word choice, and sort of story-telling here is really quite nice and I can already see a style developing ...

OK, so first of all I'd love for you to let us know your inspiration for this poem. :) Second of all I think this is the darkest poem of ...

You pulled off another charming poem once again! I applaud your polished presentation, fitting alliteration, and warm descriptions. Don't stop writing because I see a lot of potential in you ...

It's silver light is now on my finger. Hey Alzora! This is a wonderful and charming poem! My only complaint is that this quoted stanza contains an error. "It" doesn't ...

And Plan B: I suffocate from voices . S plash ing the restful, struggling to glimpse the surface, I breathe fresh air. I'm personally a fan of Plan B. The ...

Thanks for the feedback! @Calligraphy: In that stanza I was comparing memories to flowers floating on water and kind of bobbing and swaying around, as if they are remembered and ...