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Edited Every gaze was glued to tepid food, or the firm phalli hidden underneath, that chained us to our chairs, for fear of exposure. The awkward asphyxiation - like pretending ...

with your unshaven stubble dripping firmament Comma at the end of line? the long hairs tipped in gold. I would have kissed you if I could have kissed you and ...

Really? I think I was running on you last summer... Sorry, to the poem! :) First line is wonderful. Breathing IN with a sigh is so special and you worded ...

C'mon, really? I just wrote a whole damn poem about all this "untitled" nonsense. :p The first stanza needs punctuation at the end of the second line. Otherwise this was ...

Stumble into the cold bathroom, distressed; tired from today. My reflection stares down into me. Fierce. Hard eyes give everything away. Love this stanza! So much character and I can ...

Thanks, Smyling! In that stanza I meant that teen writers essentially write a lot about their anxiety so I said their life is spelt A-N-X-I-E-T-Y but I misspelt it to ...

To be honest,because you probably weren't looking for this, my favorites were the iPad ones! The colors are so cool. :) It's absolutely amazing just how well that gizmo can ...

I loved you ironic phrase that you repeated (with variation)! "How do I show this dark beauty?" Pretty cool subject overall, no mistakes in grammar/spelling. The couplet at the end ...

Young, yearning poet, you download your heart, in sans serif and sans self, on the center of my screen. Your life is spelt A-N-G-Z-Y-U-T-T-Y, rhymes with "cliche" and is untitled. ...

Perhaps I should flesh out my assertion. Obviously there is an adaptive quality to religion, otherwise it wouldn't have evolved as part of our culture. In a religiously homogeneous society ...

Anything (faith) that directly, intentionally, maliciously obstructs rational, reasonable science is bad.

Tension stacks tectonically, teetering your waist as the friction gives way to an 8.9 - record high - and a wave comes over me, into me. I drown in your ...

OK, so, couple nitpicks: "soft like" in line six. I think some punctuation would clear it up because I don't know if you mean "soft-like" or "soft, like..." And in ...

Thank you very much for the positive reviews! I'm glad my poem was meaningful to everyone, rather than simply nice. I really appreciate it. :)

Thanks for the reviews guys. :) It is about littering.