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Revised in light of perido. I. Soft instants of color stoke the lady's form while my eyes meander. Feverish passers-by blend with pastel buildings; no relief - flat . White, ...

This poem is begging for some clarifying punctuation throughout. "For her, time is of the past, a dusty picture frame in which who she once was is frozen within." This ...

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If I read something and don't comment on it, it is honestly because the poem is so bad that the task of pulling apart and fully criticizing it is a ...

Let There Be Blight - Galerius (deleted, so no link, but in spoiler) Ethanol makes things quiet. That’s what the elderly whisper, even now, as they squat on putrid food, ...

For both, the bodies are awkwardly lanky and long in proportion. The girl looks like she should be tipped over hahaha. Specifically, I like the face you made for "Callum." ...

Grass is prickling at my feet, my thoughts are restless in the heat. I want to be the rushing creek Punctuation at end of line needed, or make the following ...

Small wonder I recoil at my cross-shaped reflection, hanging ornamentally on the flexing chest of an excited woman, grimly staring back as if to warn of some future. Small talk ...

OK, so the title is fantastic! At first I thought, "OK, the Nephies were giants resulting from angels and men in Genesis." The poem is obviously not about that, so ...

Thanks for the review Nathan! I agree that for some, this is very fictional, but for me I've felt this way before. Thus my poem. :P

The title can go without the two periods. "as we, just you and I." What does this mean? Find yourselves as "we"? "Thunder and rain are across the coast." This ...

I liked the cover... :p

This is definitely a "lyric" poem, it is very rhythmic and it can kind of be sung. My one complaint is the redundant use of "long," otherwise the rest is ...

Nice poem! I like the repetition, it allows for the lines in the last stanza to be emphasized well. It has a strong ending which I always like and there ...

This stuff is really good! It looks like a professional, or at least amazing amateur, made them. The thai-eating-girl cartoon captures so much personality and character, I wish someone would ...