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Hello there, Kiicoh! Interesting poem! The first stanza is a great descriptive introduction. My favorite stanza, however, would have to be the fourth one, for its inherent flow and beautiful ...

Imagine that the hyphen is a space. Roses are red -violets are blue How do I make it so that I can use a space there and when I post ...

Fruitless, fruitless birch trees pantomime cocooning quips. Fruitless, fruitless chinese lingers on, on your lips. Blithe, blithe blades of grass waver to the song of brevity. Blithe, blithe rolling h

The leaf and panda ones are my favorites. The colorful flower (?) needs to be completed it appears.

This is a really cool poem! I love the references and intense motion of the words and thoughts. I'm going to assume that some of the more awkward phrasing of ...

Focus forces to lift from the blur your sharp hazel eyes. Infinite, hollow innuendos suspend the formless fiction of love. Curves correspond and rift in symmetry, like flower pedals. Time ...

Never feel like you have to comply to our demands. :P Looking forward to the revised version.

Sorry for your loss. Is life ever really that bad that it needs to be taken? Is life ever really too much that it can not go on? These questions ...

Welcome to YWS! First I will address the enjambment that is running amok in your poem. If you don't know, enjambment is when you continue your sentences without pause into ...

Thanks for the generous reviews! I did want to address this though: : crepitant embers escape the somber city. The word somber is meant to be sombre. I believe that's ...

Once again, I love the cherry blossom photo. If I could suggest one thing it would be to go in with Photoshop and give parts of the branches a darker, ...

note: last thing to him, I'll move on to someone else. Dedicated to Allen Ginsberg Allen is a park Allen is a tree. His trunk carries memory, rings and rings ...

"A new thought process ‘click’. A new window appears Thought visualised" I love this line. This poem, however, suffers from a lack of punctuation. Corrections/suggestions in red. What’s N ext? ...

Santana, J ust L ike the F irst T ime I hate early mornings. I hate long days at uni. Ugh. What is uni? Are you expressing an inability to ...

Yep. Here it is. ___ The torrid , golden halo hangs high in the sky, A lazy horizon ripples like a Double Dutch skipping rope . Some cacti, dully green, ...