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  • Lounge, The Re: Life Beyond School

    Don't stress. Or at least not more than you have to. I must of doodled on half my AP exams. Biggest waste of money in my life. But hell, anything ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Big Books for Big Free Time!

    Now that it's Summer, most of us in school are on break! This means a lot of free time to do nothing other than read big books. :) This list ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Forget My Age.

    I forget my age, sometimes- I can feel it drifting from me, as if my whole life is not crucified on the T of a one, What is the T ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Bullets of Peace

    I'm impressed with your short story! At first I thought the past story was a bit overly sensational, but it provided a good contrast with the archaeologists. Both stories had ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blue Cello

    Hey Kat! I wanted to address your review in-forum because it had some suggested revisions. I know what you mean with "regaled" but it fits from the story perspective. I ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Beautiful World

    EEEEEEEEK!!!! I think you have made a common, but tragic mistake with your poem. There is hardly any punctuation! Now, to be fair, you COULD have done this for effect. ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blue Cello

    Thank you all for the comments/reviews! You've all been sent personal messages. :)

    May 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: First Love

    The spaces after before the end-line punctuation are annoying, distracting, and inappropriate. Besides that, this is a good poem for being 14. I particularly liked the personification of your words, ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Blue Cello

    Palindromic memories meandered from the blue cello's plangent, hollow heart. The warmth of anonymous listeners regaled the artist, fomenting an incipient encore - cursory jots in the marginalia of his

    May 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Because I'm a Christian

    Having verbally mocked many Christians in my life, this was a little hard to read. Parts were silly, without actually making me laugh, parts were odd, and made me want ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sunday Evening

    @ Lavi: I intended to use the word "stoke" unless you're making merely a suggestion in which case I won't be changing it. (Thank you though!) :p Thank you pen ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stroll (With a Stranger)

    Thanks for the reviews! Just want to bring light to the subject. I was hoping that the title would illuminate it but I'm biased. :p The poem is about me ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: How does one add spacing in front of a line?

    Thanks! I didn't know they offer the same color as the background.

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Running through the Beach

    That's absolutely beautiful! If there's one thing I don't like though, it's the shadows coming from the edges, specifically corners. They overwhelm the image, make it too dramatic, and detract ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Trust

    Well done! I like the repetition. This makes a nice mantra for you when dealing with your "friends" I bet. :) Not much to critique here.

    Apr 30, 2011


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