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This was interesting to read and follow. The freestyle form worked well with the pace and highlighted certain thoughts well. I have no grammatical nitpicks. I do wish that you ...

Welcome to the site! This is a nice poem on the subject matter. I noticed you are missing spaces after periods, simple mistakes, simple fixes. I liked how you admired ...

"Why do we chronically go forward; when all we face is contempt." That line needs a question mark. Biggest error I could find. Which is good. :) The poem itself ...

This is a meditation on my bookshelf: bloated, dusty, a monolith of leathery pulp, dashed in forgotten howls, dashed in mimicked yearning, crumbling, armoring me in brave thoughts that amount ...

First, give it a title. Untitled poems are so trite. Second, excellent opening stanza! The comma after "is" in the first line is such a powerful pause and really sets ...

Fixed stare at first sight, deeper than a distraction. Lusty tones and torrid coils, a sweltering abstraction - limned by the foisted libido, drunken by the vacant eyes, shedding my ...

Using a kindle, I've fallen in love with e-books. I never used to like the IDEA, but when I tried it, it made a world of difference. I personally hate ...

4/10. Poor quality and annoying facebook-profile-angle.

If we're talking about cultural norms, I do remember discussing how to determine one in my anthro class. It had something to do with the severity of a people's reaction ...

Either option doesn't improve or weaken the world. Unless you make an argument for the environment, or about the psychological effects of toting such an "easy" weapon. I don't agree ...

From my experience, it's not bad exercise. (practice?) It prepares you for going out and being with dates, and what kind of emotions, social situations, and effects are involved. Maybe ...

All true, though the way Larson writes his non-fiction books is that they read like normal novels. He has a great writing style. In that case, you'd probably like Too ...

Is that historical fiction, Nate? Or all true? I just googled it real quick and it does look really good. Probably gonna get that for my own summer reading. :) ...

Aim above morality and society's norms.

Twain's own words: "Censorship is telling a man he can't have a steak just because a baby can't chew it."