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Re: Non-shy Deer
Your images don't load for me. Sad face.
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Rains
And all the world, was stoped As flying leaves, by rakes where toped And such a flash, lit up the sky And no one dared to wonder why "stoped" is ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Caffè
Adaptation subject: Dante's Inferno. (This seems to have the whole text: Caffè Dolorous tendrils of grey claw for pity against the evening's cool sarcophagus urging me on. It helps to ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
They say the windows to the heart, lie within the eyes. But what if you can't see their face, Because your eyes are blind? Blind to the liar. Blind to ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen
Off the top of my head: Favorite directors: Ozu, Kurosawa, Malle, Wes Anderson, Gus Van Sant, Tarentino, Scorcsese, Allen, Gilliam, Chaplin, Bergman, Cassavetes, Truffaut, Chaplin. Some of the best po
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: A Gaged Love
Cute poem. I wish you hadn't broken it up into so many different thoughts and subjects. But I'm sure Mikaela Gage would like it. I found it to be pretty ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Most of all
Most of all I like driving, Alone at night, With the radio off and no seat belt, And if the moon is bright, I feel this line lessens the effect. ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Han Han Digest
I just read an article in one of my magazine subscriptions that I got today, profiling a Chinese essayist, novelist, and blogger, named Han Han. His name is actually his ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: True Colors
Thank you for the thorough review, JoJo. Much of the technicalities were conscious tonality decisions, which I will PM you about, but I'm going to use this post to address ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Religion causes more problems than it solves
Best way to go about this discussion is to clearly define the terms in your question, and perhaps even refine it to something more abstract. My Belief: There's absolutely nothing ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Namesake
The first one is really lacking contrast, it could use some darker darks and whiter highlights. Great form and shape though. The second is over saturated. If you want to ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: The Impossible
Hello, Knight. This poem is suffering. Suffering from a punctation famine. The whole first half contains practically zero punctuation, which also means it has practically zero pauses. Nothing has emph
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Questionable Sponsor/Ads
Hm, I didn't notice any association to Google. I suppose that makes a difference, it's a shame nonetheless. I'll shoot him a PM for sure. Thanks, Snoink.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Questionable Sponsor/Ads
The process of writing is by no means an easy task. Jotting down the first thing that comes to your mind is easy, but writing a paper for an 'A+' ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Jesse Owens
I'm not going to criticize you for upping the contrast in photoshop, because when the lighting was bad for photos of art I used to take for a newspaper, I ...
Jun 28, 2011
