-
Re: Hey!
The only part I have in common is the bananas part, and I'm pretty sure I know 567ajt... anyway! Welcome to YWS! If you need anything or have any questions ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Asphyxiation
Jack steering, throws back the engine, blood black barracuda thrown down back into the swarming allegiance of crazed fish. Sardines we can always forgive, flooding their monotonous exposés into the ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Mother
The crinkling of your face, skin splintering beneath the crashing ceiling before our voices capsize, and rise, the tide tight in your soiled gut. Even the throat of the doorway ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Capitalism
I grew up loving that game as well, not realizing just how subversive and bourgeois it was.
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: What's your favourite word?
Cretin; what I (habitually) call 90% of the strangers I encounter.
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Room
@ryan: I'd liken it to both Camus and Sartre, neither of which are poets. The rest I'll say in a PM, the appropriate mode of communication when replying to a ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Hey
You should say who your friend is! (like his username) But welcome to YWS! Warning: I'm resistant to mind control.
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Hello There
Welcome to YWS, SilverLove! :)
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: World War Z
I read this a few years ago and loved it as well. A very unique reading experience that I actually think would work much better as a film, but still ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Room
I'm going to be honest, there's quite a bit wrong with this poem. The poem overall feels random and poorly planned/edited, starting with "the boy" who gets introduced out of ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: What's your favourite word?
Prolix: it means wordy. (The cool part is that the word is what it means) Other words I like are the kind that aren't easily translatable into English. Particularly this: ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare Cover Design
Don't know about the contest but as far as these two photos go, less was more, and I liked the second one better. In the first one it's harder to ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Personal Avatar
Nice job. :)
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Innocence Bane
This poem is great considering how much you were able to condense into three brief stanzas, while also giving the air of lightness. Definitely fun to read. Your rhyming worked ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Caffè
The title is Italian (like the epic poem) for espresso. Just to clear that up.
Jul 23, 2011
