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Re: Posting Essays on the Internet
I've thought about this as well and all options are less than ideal. Above posters pretty much pointed out everything.
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Alan Watts: On Being God
If you don't know me, I'm an atheist. This isn't a discussion, or lecture (text from lecture) for that matter, on whether or not Jesus existed, or if God is ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Before You Know It
They’re almost like clouds, they’re so unstable, so quick to fade when touched; This analogy and image is dead on, I love it. It makes your opening very strong for ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Basmati
Love this poem but don't have the time to go into depth so I'm just making you aware of a few errors. we manger on crouton topics that crunch with ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: I Only See You In Home Films
Revised: Mulling in the dank basement, wasted as my blanket, culling memories to be tossed, spread against the sore wall, stretched o'er pressed cracks, relaxing the breast-like contours of my ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Wilde's Prelude - first sentence
This reminds me that I need to reread this amazing book sometime, because I don't know how to answer.
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: all the pretty things
This is a short poem so I don't have much to say. First of all I thought that it was too dominated by questions, but it worked thanks to your ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Starting a Book Club
I'm planning on starting a book club next month and I've never been apart of one before (in real life, not in the YWS Clubs section, in case that needs ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies Cover (contest entry)
Way fancy! :p I really love the images, but the text looks tacked on. The only exception being the title in the second one which I think looks excellent. I ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Evol evlove
This poem is all over the place. It's interesting but only gets good in the last stanza. The title itself prepares the reader for a forced poem. I get that ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Favorite Soundtracks
Classics/musicals aside I really like the soundtrack for "American Beauty"
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: The Sapling
Spare this sapling tethered to a tagged sign planted on the corner where we used to chew the lotus everything is different in this cranny below the adult line of ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: low tide
this fugue is as all oceans except with fewer stashed, nacre huts * a conchology in which i press my ear less to the tide's zonophone * , the dragging ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Tim Minchin's Storm
They animated this! Classic! He has some other good stuff but this will always be his best. :P
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Riots in Britain
Thanks for sharing, it's just another of the many breathtaking, raw videos of the scene.
Aug 12, 2011
