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You said this is for a competition. I'm guessing it's a slam. We can talk later about why I don't like slams (or competitive poetry in general), but for the ...

Really it's just because they love the movie V for Vendetta...

"Remember, remember, the 5th of November The Gunpowder Treason and plot; I see of no reason why Gunpowder Treason Should ever be forgot."

It is possible, but I wouldn't bet all of my money on it. In order for the whole world to have one state, that means all of the bad stuff ...

why would the world have one state? I mean, if you read the bible it is all obvious... But is that what you are talking about? I should possible read ...

The European Union is a model I can see being applied to the Americas, South eastern Asia, and other parts of the world (ultimately THE world). The main thing stopping ...

Hello Mustard! I think by now I don't have to repeat myself, but I will. The overuse of italics puts an unnecessary burden on your work. First stanza... "I thought ...

Nice, Shade, they must be crackin' down since it's a new album. :)

I’d like to say I write symphonies; choral epics for unpitched voices, Making up words is cool by me when done well. The premise of this is a little bit ...

You might want to format this right. Some poetry is actually written like that. I don't think this was intended though. Hey Bloodhound, welcome to YWS. Let's take a look. ...

Hey Lumi! I started reviewing this in a text file and forgot all about it. Seems as though no one else has reviewed your poem so here goes. :) Graverobber, ...

Time un- furls slowly, as do the leaves, as do the words. As if we plucked from domestic altitudes, from Buddha's hand the soil's stillness. I did not stir but ...

How long will this thing get passed along!? In reference to your title: metaphysics =/= science. Simple as that. In reference to what your post actually contained: as tr3x said, ...

I never found Marx worthy of reading strictly for his economic ideas. That said, I do however think Das Kapital is profoundly relevant economically. Am I a communist? In one ...

Correct usage the possessive form of the pronoun "it" is "its" without the the apostrophe. Don't worry, it's a common mistake. Keep it up.