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Re: Pericles and the Minotaur
Whoah. This rocked. An outstanding epic poem. The only thing that bothers me (and it's probably not that big of a deal but I'm kind of an obsessive mythology buff) ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Edit: The Poem
Cool. The pen is most definitely mightier than the sword! ~D'Inkweaver
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: The "Dark" Poem
Yo! Not trying to sound overtly scathing here but what exactly is this poem about? War? A warrior? Is it anti-violence? Sorry, maybe I'm just missing the point but although ...
Mar 12, 2007 -
Re: Wichtlein Investigations: A Brief History
Em, well... To answer your questions... I'm going to integrate certain parts in the beginning of the story, others scattered throughout. Desdemona is a major character but no longer works ...
Mar 10, 2007 -
Re: Wichtlein Investigations: A Brief History
Wichtlein Investigations Character Bios I. Brief Descriptions Name: Hector Wichtlein Gender: Male Species: Homo sapiens/Poltergeist Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Grey Race: Caucasian Status: Employed,
Mar 1, 2007 -
Re: The Sun Bird
Wow! I couldn't really find anything wrong other than a couple of typos (And I had to look really hard to find those!). The flow and tempo was a little ...
Mar 1, 2007 -
Re: The Ballad of John Henry's Hammer
The Ballad of John Henry’s Hammer John Henry was a steel drivin’ man, Workin’ on that Carolina line, They say he was the greatest ever lived, He drove that steel ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Where does my story go?
I have a story that's a bit of a genre bender and I'm not sure where to post it. It's based (loosely) on the ancient Celtic legend of "An Táin" ...
Feb 26, 2007 -
Re: A Supernatural PI Story (Wichtlein Investigations?)
Thanks Myth. I've gotten rid of the typos/repetitions (I think!) and on your suggestion for the digital text on the vending machine, I've bolded it (That way it's not easily ...
Feb 26, 2007 -
Re: A Supernatural PI Story (Wichtlein Investigations?)
Bathed in the glow of a street light a lone vending machine hummed. The neon lamp buzzed and flickered, plunging the storefront in and out of darkness. A car door ...
Feb 24, 2007 -
Re: a supernatural PI story (still working on a title)
Trinity looked across her desk at Michael Rockne as if he had three heads. After an awkward silence, she spoke slowly, as if talking to a toddler. “There’s no such ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Yo to everyone. I'm Gareth but I prefer to be know as Inkweaver since Gareth was the kitchen boy knight in Camelot whose Lady didn't like him. Seems to fit ...
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: Rwrendren's Academy
Yo. Really enjoyed this mini-intro to your novel and am dying to hear more! Please continue posting this intriguing story! The Inkweaver was here! P.S. Have you ever read "Shade's ...
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: the nine lives of allen grey [r]
Yo. I'm the new guy and this is my first post so I'll keep it short and to the point. First of all, (this is probably my most biased point ...
Feb 20, 2007
