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I totally agree on the shorter chapter thing. I'm just never sure on where to end it because I don't want it to be too short. I also like to ...

Yeah. I'm too close to this to do much with it right now, and I'm probably never going to end up editing this because I feel like I've said what ...

The awkward formatting is because the stanza thing isn't working for me. I'll try and fix that asap. This poem is really personal, so it felt good to get it ...

I know that this is not a review and that you'd rather have a real review than just a comment. But this deserves a million likes. If I could give ...

I'm sorry I can't be of more help with the dialogue. I've never had a problem writing it, so I don't really know what to say other than that.

You impersonator! Just joking, I just noticed this and yeah... Okay, I'll go now.

*high fives* I love semicolons! They help me avoid run-ons without making me actually end the sentence. I loved your points. Usually, the same people review this, so it's great ...

Don't worry, I wasn't offended

Thanks so much for the review. However, the lack of capitalization and punctuation was a stylistic choice; I wanted it to be that way. I'm glad you thought it was ...

Could you elaborate on how the comparisons with Julian and Marisol are a bit cliche? I was trying to show Julian's view of herself and Marisol. She almost idolizes Marisol ...

Thanks so much! I'm going to enter this in a contest (that I got second in last year. Watch out first place, here I come!). Because I'm entering it, I ...

In regards to the "I'm glad I got through to you." Finn was the one who said that, not Caden. I'll try to clarify things when I edit. Again, thanks ...

About the sexism thing. I meant that they should listen up because he wasn't going to say it again when he brought them to their dorm. Not what I was ...

I really appreciate your review. I think I will end up ending the chapter sooner when I edit things. Most of your questions are answered later in the story, though ...

I really appreciate your review. I think I will end up ending the chapter sooner when I edit things. Most of your questions are answered later in the story, though ...