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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 12 (LMS IV)

    Hey, Shady! Ink here for a belated review, so let's get into it! This is kind of a transitional part. I don't think it works on its own. I think ...

    Sep 27, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 11 (LMS IV)

    Hey, Shady! This is probably going to be a rather short review, but I hope I can help nonetheless. I'm really glad you managed to do the bathing scene without ...

    Sep 16, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 10 (LMS IV)

    Hey Shady! Ink here for another review. I'm all caught up now! “You think you can’t?” he asked, lifting an eyebrow mockingly. “I didn’t realize such a simple task would ...

    Sep 14, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 9 (LMS IV)

    Hey Shady! Ink here back with another dubiously helpful review. Let's get to it! I’d really prefer a mode that doesn’t involve a dragon. No issues with this. It just ...

    Sep 13, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 8 (LMS IV)

    Hey, Shady! Ink here for another belated review. I'm going to try to do one a day from now on, so I should catch up fairly quickly. Anyway, let's get ...

    Sep 12, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 7 (LMS IV)

    Hey, Shady! Ink fashionably late as always, so let's get to it. “She claims intelligence isn’t highly valued amongst the skills an assassin must have.” When did Jerica say that? ...

    Sep 2, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 6 (LMS IV)

    Hey! Storm here to catch up on reviewing this. I think this review might be kind of short, so my apologies, but I hope I can manage to bring up ...

    Aug 21, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 5 (LMS IV)

    Heya. You now know my true identity as a horrible, lazy slacker. Well, I'm here to hopefully fix that and get back on top of reviewing this novel! Jerica was ...

    Aug 18, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 4 (LMS IV)

    Hey! I'm actually getting to this in a somewhat timely manner, so go me! Let's get to it. So, at a certain point, I think telling is okay. In the ...

    Aug 2, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 3 (LMS IV)

    Hey! I'm finally available to review, so let's get to it! I think it's very interesting to see how these people in Jerica's life have shaped her to be who ...

    Jul 29, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 3

    Yo, Bisc! I'm finally able to review, so let's get to it. For the past day, I've been very tired, so apologies in advance if I say something really stupid. ...

    Jul 29, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Other
    Re: Flash Poem #1

    Hey, myjaspercat! Ink here to kick your poem outta the Green Room, so let's get to it! and take my words and twist them until they became knotted ropes of ...

    Jul 20, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 2.2

    Hey, Bisc! let's get to it! "Hi, Janet," he said, "How are you?" Pronoun issue. Also, I think this is kind of strange to say to a sibling. I know ...

    Jul 19, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 2.1

    Hey, Bisc! Sorry for forgetting about your ping! Let's remedy that, shall we? I really don't understand Janet. She seems to be really mature about the business (which does something ...

    Jul 15, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 2 (LMS IV)

    Hey, Shadow! Ink here for a second review of this, so let's get started! The ground was hard and cold against Jerica’s face. Her entire head was throbbing rhythmically with ...

    Jul 14, 2018


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