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try as hard as I could, I could not find the hidden meaning..... But im absolutly DIEING!!!!! To know what this means. I think you have real talent to put ...

OOOH! I like that one much better than the first one :D This had more of a FEEL to it. Very well done! no doubt about it! you are a ...

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! PIRATES ROCK! :pirate2: ~inkling :smt063

Aaarg!!! I had to dig to find this story!!! I wanted to read the chapter Soooo bad! could you also PM me when you post the 3rd chapter? (also :wink: ...

wow, I like that. It was very refreshing and different. Is there going to be a sequel? That would be great. hummmm... I didn't really find anything wrong with it, ...

This was also painted a vivid picture in my mind, which I like. I think this deserves a gold star * puts gold star* I love your style of writing, ...

hummm.. well, the poem was a bit jerky, and the ending was a bit murky. but other that that, you've got it down pat! :wink: nice rhyming as well!

LOVE your style! but as soon as I started to read I was sorta like 'whoa!' A school on a ship? thats what it is right? oh well, It was ...

huuummmmm... I liked this poem. But is she falling,or imaginary falling? just an insignificant detail. :P keep up the good work! It was better than some of mine! :wink:

i LOVED this! I actually jumped when the man she thought was her father wasn't her father. (not the best english huh?) That is EXACTLY what im like when i ...