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Well, the key to making Ceil not a Mary Sue has less to do with her personality and more to do with how the story itself perceives her. Does everything ...

The main issue I have is with the main character, Ceil--currently she seems, forgive me, like a bit of a Mary Sue. :shock: MARY SUE? There will be no Mary ...

Thanks to everyone who read/responded to my post! You were all very helpful, and I will be back later to reply more thoroughly when I have more time. *phew* I ...

I'm currently planning a fantasy story. I haven't started writing it yet because there are some holes that need to be filled. But for now, I'd like your honest opinion ...

Common problems with Fantasy: cliches and info-dumps. Avoid both. For those who happen not to know - a cliche is an over-used, unorigional idea. Info-dumping is when you give the ...

By the way, I think it's a little harsh to say that if you answer one question "yes" in that exam, your novel should be "abandoned at once." I mean, ...

All of my answers would be in bold , but it takes way too long to do that. Sorry. The Exam 1. Does nothing happen in the first fifty pages? ...