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Re: Scars
Nice work! Succinct and believable. Especially loving that savage 'Nearly.'
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: One more night
Hey man, I came here to return the favour and was shocked how much what you're writing about mirrors my actual life (trite as that sounds). Can't count the amount ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Fortuna Salad
Thanks very much for your input! I think I see the spelling mistake you mean - will clear that up asap. This is my first submission on this site, so ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Fortuna Salad
Thanks for such a prompt review! What i intended was that leo's ring was Will's bad-quality ring, mistakenly brought to their table by Andy. Also, Steven was just a really ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: First poem. Quite short. Not a haiku.
Thanks very much, very helpful. :)
Sep 2, 2009
