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Re: Love at First Sight
Hello!! Firstly, I just want to say that I love the idea here-it's really quite original, with there being so many Stephanie Meyer fan-fics. I love the character of Rosalie, ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Stories of the Wind
This is the first time I've ever reviwed poetry apart from at school! I didn't think I was hugely into them, but so many poems here are so lovely!! You ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Lighthouse - Prologue
This seems to be a brilliant idea, which could be amazing. One of the main errors that I found is the language here and there. You say 'mom', but, as ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Choice Is A Misconception a Alex Rider Story
My initial thoughts-well done! This is generally a brilliant piece of work. You have really captured Anthony Horowitz's writing style! It does have the feel of one of his novels-great ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Innocence Dies Young
There is a brilliant idea behind this story, and really makes a statement about the reality of young civilians dying in war-go you! It really is a fantastic story-extremely fast ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Fate Calling
I thought that this was a brilliant story, for several reasons. I think you really captured Alice's character here, like when she is in a serious situation, but is still ...
Jan 11, 2009
