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Honestly, I loved this. It's real and to the point. I liked when it said I steady remain, Position unchanged, With my knowledge staying the same. I know nothing Keep ...

Basically, the poem is about how people act as if its okay. Wearing a "mask" so to speak, to keep their true feelings hidden. As soon as the "mask" is ...

This is one amazing poem. Your a really good poet and this poem says it. Keep writing!!! :D

The stage is set The bow is taken The curtains close The act is over Let's see who knows Take off the mask Can't escape the past The pain and ...

This is really funny!! You're really good at making parodys!

I seriously, absolutely LOVED this!!!! I laughed the whole way through it!! I kinda wish we had to do stuff like this for school!!

I really like this story. Some punctuation and capitalization issues, but an all over great story!

I really, really, really like this. It was nicely written and I can relate. Good Job!! Keep Writing!!!