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  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Realistic Re: Within my blood (Epilogue)

    This is amazing! I unfourtunately didn't read the beginning of your story, but even the first few sentances had me hooked! I'm new to this site, but I can tell ...

    Jul 10, 2017


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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