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Re: The Daily Routine
It's really short, but you presented it very well. However, most poetry provides a lot of detail and really paints a picture in the reader's head. Yours did this, but ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: You
I really like these lyrics. It isn't one of those songs that just repeat the same things over and over again; it actually has a structure and meaning. Not to ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Lightning Strikes
The thunder rolls Just a few seconds before The lightning strikes. The tree stands All alone In a barren, quiet field. Its branches blow and Its leaves rattle, Endlessly, In ...
May 4, 2011
