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  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Daily Routine

    It's really short, but you presented it very well. However, most poetry provides a lot of detail and really paints a picture in the reader's head. Yours did this, but ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: You

    I really like these lyrics. It isn't one of those songs that just repeat the same things over and over again; it actually has a structure and meaning. Not to ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Lightning Strikes

    The thunder rolls Just a few seconds before The lightning strikes. The tree stands All alone In a barren, quiet field. Its branches blow and Its leaves rattle, Endlessly, In ...

    May 4, 2011


seeing this tag and going "oh what's this? :)" then getting slapped in the face with shady's good grammar is the worst thing that's ever happened to me
— SilverNight