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  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Daily Routine

    It's really short, but you presented it very well. However, most poetry provides a lot of detail and really paints a picture in the reader's head. Yours did this, but ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: You

    I really like these lyrics. It isn't one of those songs that just repeat the same things over and over again; it actually has a structure and meaning. Not to ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Lightning Strikes

    The thunder rolls Just a few seconds before The lightning strikes. The tree stands All alone In a barren, quiet field. Its branches blow and Its leaves rattle, Endlessly, In ...

    May 4, 2011


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality