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Re: Memoirs of yesteryear
actually... I'm very grateful for your critic :) As you have been able to see, I still make a lot of basic mistakes such as grammar or syntax (I'm not ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: Dewdrops and a sunrise.
sure is a dreamy picture you gave there. Your vocabulary is very rich and that's one thing I'm impressed about. Sorry if I can't give any feedback though, I'm still ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Self-Reflection
hi and thanks for your comments! thething192: haha thank you for the correction, i've always had some problems with my grammar. However, I was trying to follow the metrical feet ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Memoirs of yesteryear
Alright, first of all, I know this still isn't cheerful, but this has also been written while I was blue. (Mh, inspiration seemed to come easier, how odd) This is ...
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Self-Reflection
[pre]It was a dare I played and lost A year later, I pay the cost Drowning slowly, living in shadows, Nothing to see, but bitter sorrows. They have white skin, ...
Jan 15, 2008
