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Re: Glass
This was a little choppy to me. If I could break this glass Then you could see me If I could break this glass Then you would know my name ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Someone
I liked this a lot but the chorus was a little difficult for me to follow. Love me, hug me Push and shove me Never gonna find someone Like you, ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Wasted
Hello ilikepenguins, and welcome to YWS! I ope you're having fun on the site so far. Before I start your critique, I'd like to point out to you that we ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Wasted
Leave the words I say in their places Commonly awkward For the most part jaded But they still have some meaning left As much as it hurts me To have ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Caught Up In The Moment, But Not In The Right Way
This is probably one of the most well-written All Time Low fanfics I've read! I love how you introduce your character in a teenage-normal scene, instead of magically appearing and ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Hello!
Thank you, Everyone! All of you are so nice! :]
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Hello!
Erm.. Hi Everyone! I'm Ilikepenguins and I'm new here (obviously). ^^; Well, I've been writing for a few years now, but mostly just lyrics and poems. Hopefully, I'll get into ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: I swear I never loved, Yet I still want more
I like this. :] You can really feel what's going on and what the songs letting you find out (If that makes any sense!). Keep writing!!
Jul 6, 2008
