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Hi Hannah and Flute Loops, Thanks a lot for your comments! Now I just have to think of a better way to edit it. The worst thing about editing is ...

Thanks! The song isn't really finished yet... It is short, yeah :D I'm thinking about expanding the verses, but I want to leave the chorus as short as it is.. ...

CassandraMazza and okkervilpuddle , totally agree with you that the story lacks details. :( I think that no matter how the contest goes, I will work further on this idea, ...

Nats , thank you! Edited accordingly now. Glad you liked it! I haven't been writing for ages... mistielovesyou , I get your point. Jenny was indeed the only person that ...

Thanks a lot for reviewing my first real attempt to write something more or less serious. :oops: Special thanks go to Kara - I corrected most of the mistakes you ...