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Hi Hannah and Flute Loops, Thanks a lot for your comments! Now I just have to think of a better way to edit it. The worst thing about editing is ...

Hello, I'm here to review your short story. I'm actually a fan of short sentences, so well done with those! Very easy to read and the style is somehow... hilarious ...

Thanks! The song isn't really finished yet... It is short, yeah :D I'm thinking about expanding the verses, but I want to leave the chorus as short as it is.. ...

Hi Hannah, So I'm finally here to review your contest entry story. Sorry it took me so long! I liked the feeling of sadness your story arose in me. I'm ...

This is just something silly I suddenly wrote at work. I'm really bad at writing music, but I have some rocky melodies in my head when I read this. It's ...

CassandraMazza and okkervilpuddle , totally agree with you that the story lacks details. :( I think that no matter how the contest goes, I will work further on this idea, ...

Hi, My name's Victoria and I'm here to review :-) The idea of your short abstract is very interesting. I liked it how it gives the reader space to interpret ...

Hello, and WOW. I am impressed. It may be silly to say so, but when I read such works as yours (and that happens rarely!) I get very inspired. Your ...

Hello writers, readers and reviewers! I haven't been at YWS for... 2 years! But I'm glad that not much has changed - it's still a very friendly creative community I'm ...

Nats , thank you! Edited accordingly now. Glad you liked it! I haven't been writing for ages... mistielovesyou , I get your point. Jenny was indeed the only person that ...

Hello to all writers and readers! I haven't been at YWS for a while, but now I am back with loads of fresh ideas and boiling imagination. I decided to ...

Just wanted to share a review a have written some time ago after reading this book. If you're looking for something that's easy to read, The Book Thief is NOT ...

Hi, My name's Victoria and I'm here to review your story obviously :-) First of all... thank you! I normally try to review only stories I enjoyed reading for at ...

Hi Lexi, I enjoyed reading your piece of writing very much. And my first impression was that... it's actually very sad. I believe this is the feeling you wanted to ...

Hi! I'm here to review your piece of writing obviously. ;) Is this supposed to be a story in the future? I mean, is this an abstract or the full ...