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Re: Red
I thought that it was good but i think you could have made it simpler...shorter lines maybe?? sometimes beauty comes out of simplicity and it can make it more affective
Oct 7, 2009
I thought that it was good but i think you could have made it simpler...shorter lines maybe?? sometimes beauty comes out of simplicity and it can make it more affective
Oct 7, 2009
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