icanhassuicide

I cannot find anything wrong with this. My only suggestions would be for titles. You could choose things from the poem, like divine lady, or make up something that gives ...

This shadow creeping upon me I want to rid of it Wanting to tear my soul apart Like a black cloud above Overall I could not have said this better, ...

I would love (no pun intended) to be able to tell you I know how this feels, but I don't. Overall this was a wonderful poem, but I believe the ...

One fearful frightful winter day I gazed out once into the gray  And there down by the sea A little boy sat watching me I strode toward him And asked ...

This poem has clear meaning, and I love how you thought of it whilst eating breakfast. This is well thought out and carefully rhymed, in such a way that I ...

This poem has a very true nd obvious meaning. I can tell that either you or someone close to you is going through this. Glad you can vent it out ...

I absolutely loved how dark and twisted it was. I use dark poetry as a form of letting out all of my hatred and anger, and I wish others would ...

This was wonderfully rhythmic. I do not understand what it is like to have sclerosis, but my younger sibling struggles with it every day. It was detailed and accurate enough ...

Void, empty, hollow inside My dreams have fled, my hopes have died Existence has no reason Life's just passing with each season She was my life, my hope, my love ...