ibelieve_inme

I love it. LOVE it. and who cares if its not perfect (whos to say that anyways?) its good, and if SOMEONE likes it, then its a success.

oh yes, i know that feeling! peaches are great. But hey, i get what you are trying to get across- he misses her. so sad, love is. good work.

thanks both for your comments...I'll keep them in mind for my future works...this was just rough draft anyways..but i won a poetry contest with it, so i kept it as ...