ibelieve_inme

This made me feel like I was there, in the poem, having it happen to me, personally. That is exactly what poetry should do. It's beautiful and I love it ...

Your english isnt correct in alot of places, but I like it that way. It sounds more interesting if you read it outloud. It drew me in, and made me ...

i really like this, because it shows real feeling, from you personally. But itsstill something anyone can relate to. I feel the constant pressure of the world around me, yet ...

Wow...Totally real . I love it, keep it up! I agree, what made you want to write this? (If your anything like me, you meant to write a song or ...

lovely photos, keep it up tips: black and white can make buildings and lanscapes seem intriguing, and make the "looker" wonder about the missing colors. Also, Try closeups of different ...

I like the word choices...very detailed, but then again, i cant imagine anything for myself. I definitly like the second version better. It really makes the reader feel...and wonder what ...

i like this alot....we had health in the art room, and our art teacher likes nude was awkward. neways, nice writing, keep it up

thanks, ill try it

two of my close friends...

La Di Da, Just another entry from the "Me" Files...... The world has changed, my friends. We used to be able to be who we were really, with no questions ...

the fire was at a bonfire we do here every year. Everyone brings junk (wood, old couches, shelves, etc) and we pour lighter fluid over top and set it ablaze! ...

uh, thanks?

i know its not perfect - its far from that, obviously. I just like to stop when i like it, because i have a tendency of changing things too much, ...

firedance

I posted the "sloppy copy" of htis in OTHER in the MISC forum, but once I revised it, I felt it fit here better. It doesnt rhyme, I know, but ...