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Re: Firedance
The second person's head isn't lost in darkness....its a fro! lol Sorry for the confusion - - - Thanks for all the crit tho, I greatly appreciate it!!!
Oct 11, 2007 -
Re: Beet's Portfolio
freakin.....wow. thats all i have to say. **hint of jealousy** you better NEVER EVER give up art!!
Jul 17, 2007 -
Re: Areida's photos
the second photo would be PERFECT if the corner wasnt cropped off. I like the first two best....I almost thought the first one was upside down, until i looked closer. ...
Jun 22, 2007 -
Re: A few of my favourites.
id have to agree with Ink....the second one in photomanipulations is beyond words. All of them area amazing though. Very imaginitive. where do you get your inspiration? I'd like a ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Agony (freewrite, no-rhyme poetry)
thanks for the crit guys.....sorry about the glossary. I wrote this for a "end-of-school-extra-credit" thing, and this was the form we were suposed to write it in. I just copied ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Agony (freewrite, no-rhyme poetry)
Before you read this… I know you know the meanings of these words...but I’m using some of them in a different context. Those definitions are below. Cancer: any evil condition ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Take it away
...Wow. Let me tell you what I think.....[not that it matters] Just leave me be... Stay away from here, and now. Take away the pain once more. Take away the ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Arachnophobia
"the muscles last stance" that line seemed like it was missing a sylable. i liked the poem, but i jsut cant get over that one line. i like the wording, ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Nausea
Temple as in body....duh. I liked it, none-the-less. Keep up the fresh writing...its much appreciated.
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: Adventures in Photography
I love the last one. It looks like a book cover. Or it could be the perfect illustration to a poem. In Any Case, it was enlightening. Thanks.
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: The Tale of The Tale
this is funny. Oh and I LOVE your book suggestion. It's a hilarious movie too, but the book is always better than the movie. I enjoyed reading this, i wasn't ...
Mar 8, 2007 -
Re: Child
I love this. It makes me shiver just thinking about it. Very personal.
Jan 14, 2007 -
Re: Love in the Crossroads
I love your wording, and I understood all of it just fine. it all depends on the reader, really. Whether or not they connect. Good work, keep it up.
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: Black and White Photos
My favorite is navy pier....That is a very good photo, and should be recognized as such by anyone who sees it (just like the rest of these.) Wonderful photos...keep it ...
Dec 26, 2006 -
Re: This is about insanity
So, the same lines that people didnt seem to get, are the ones I loved. example: Insanity; it comes and goes; always almost and almost never always LOVE it. And ...
Dec 23, 2006
