iateyourdogx67

Cut my fingers, drink my blood Pull me away from society No more mortality No more life It could very much be the end tonight. The end of it all ...

That was very creative :D i really liked it a lot. Keep writing :D

Wow, thats really sad D: but the story, it was great. I had a clear picture of what was going on in my mind, and i was sucked in once ...

Among all the kids, so invisible nobody stares, nobody cares, I can finally be myself. theres nothing to worry about just me and the clear blue sky _______________________________________ thanks for ...

You didnt just break my heart, You didnt just tear it apart, You rippped it up in a million peices and put it through despair, still unaware if your love ...

Thankyou everyone for taking the time to read this and give me feedback. :D I really appreciate it.

Hi ben :) I really like this, and for not writing poetry a lot, this is very good :) To me, it seemed like this line didnt really fit in ...

Hey there iateyourdogx67! I'm Ben! :D - Welcome to YWS! Anyway! I love this short and sweet poem. It's just the perfect length in my opinion! One nit-pick I would ...

Woww, once i read the first few sentances i was automatically hooked. I absolutely love the way you wrote this, and the way you described everything was very well done. ...

Hii, this was very nicely and well written and I really liked it, it is very creative and i really like how you kept saying "thats to depressing" or "thats ...

I really liked this, The way it is written is very nicely done Good job :D My favorite line is, "he celebrates his birthday coughing up tumbleweed" it seems to ...

I like you, Do you like me? I guess were just not meant to be And by we, I mean you and I, I and you I guess ill just ...

When i look at a sunset, I think about my life. how its flashing through my eyes going at a quick pace, traveling through time. when I really think hard... ...