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SO cute! I cant believe you were 5 when you wrote this? I cant even hold a pen at that age ! haha... anyway, this is good and super cute ...

Thanks for your wonderful review! I told you, I cant express myself in English medium. I am also not a good English writer... Yes, you have a few grammar problems, ...

Everybody here review so good. haha. Im now afraid to post my story =)

I like the meaning your poem implies. The wordings are fine with me, thats all =)