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The characters are a bit confusing. There should be more explaining of the characters and the plot. Very mystifying and mysterious! It leaves the reader hanging and wanting more. I ...

The names were very creative and sound very fitting for the story! They are a little complicated but are still super cool! It was very quirky, but I think you ...

It was a really cute story! The plot is a bit rushed though, there should be more explaining of the characters to give the reader a deep understanding of the ...

This was a very unique and suspenseful fist chapter! It makes me dying to hear more. It is a great start that makes me thirst for more to be uncovered. ...

This poem connects with other's feelings and has a very deep meaning. Its very meaningful and not to complex so everyone can understand it. You write wonderful poems and I ...