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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Forever and Ever

    Is this about twilight? Haha I think it is. It's very cute, and I like how you tied God into it. The only thing is the grammar/spelling aren't correct. You ...

    Oct 24, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Whispered Secret - Chatper 1 *Arrival*

    Chapter 1. Arrival This is the story of me, Alex Lioh. I’m a fourteen-year-old girl who just moved from Florida to North Dakota. We couldn’t afford our home with just ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: a rose for the abused..

    I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, smashed in the face with a 2 by 4, my body rolling down the hill landing in that very field. The 2 ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What are you reading at the moment?

    I'm reading "Fragile Eternity" by Melissa Marr... it's a pretty good series so far.

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Whispered Secret - Preface

    Also, from this little piece I still didn't know if your MC was a boy or a girl. It seems like you meticulously described everybody but the MC, so when ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A True Friend

    Haha this is cute, I really like it :) It's so true! Especialy the french fry part :D -Rach

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Real World - Prologue

    I really liked this. It keeps me wondering what is coming next. And it wasn't extremely long like some of the other stories on YWS. Good job :) -Rach

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A Whispered Secret - Preface

    PREFACE I wasn’t aware of the dark forest behind me. Wasn’t aware of the waves crashing against rocks in the distance. Wasn’t aware of the rain pouring down on me. ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Ch. 1.1)

    Hi, I'm new :) I thought this was descrbibed beautifully, but it was a little long. I was drawn in by your title, and the chapter captivated me :) -Rach

    Oct 23, 2009


Sometimes wisdom came from strange places, even from giant teenaged goldfish.
— Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena