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Re: Forever and Ever
Is this about twilight? Haha I think it is. It's very cute, and I like how you tied God into it. The only thing is the grammar/spelling aren't correct. You ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: A Whispered Secret - Chatper 1 *Arrival*
Chapter 1. Arrival This is the story of me, Alex Lioh. I’m a fourteen-year-old girl who just moved from Florida to North Dakota. We couldn’t afford our home with just ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: a rose for the abused..
I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, smashed in the face with a 2 by 4, my body rolling down the hill landing in that very field. The 2 ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm reading "Fragile Eternity" by Melissa Marr... it's a pretty good series so far.
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: A Whispered Secret - Preface
Also, from this little piece I still didn't know if your MC was a boy or a girl. It seems like you meticulously described everybody but the MC, so when ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: A True Friend
Haha this is cute, I really like it :) It's so true! Especialy the french fry part :D -Rach
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: The Real World - Prologue
I really liked this. It keeps me wondering what is coming next. And it wasn't extremely long like some of the other stories on YWS. Good job :) -Rach
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: A Whispered Secret - Preface
PREFACE I wasn’t aware of the dark forest behind me. Wasn’t aware of the waves crashing against rocks in the distance. Wasn’t aware of the rain pouring down on me. ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Ch. 1.1)
Hi, I'm new :) I thought this was descrbibed beautifully, but it was a little long. I was drawn in by your title, and the chapter captivated me :) -Rach
Oct 23, 2009
