hunter111

Hmmm... life after death, er? God, their's so many theory's on this that it's so hard to choose... My views on it though? i'm not to entirely sure, since it's ...

Thrown into hell; part 3 Listening casually to the sound of the heels of the female demon’s shoe’s clack against the black marble floor, the baron of hell known solely ...

I thought so, i've seen alot of other writer's use that as well, and while it does sound correct it just doesn't look right when written out like that alot ...

Geez, it’s been over 4 weeks since my last post already? Where does the time go? Anyway, I actually would have had this chapter up a couple of weeks ago ...

Right, I've taken care of all of the mistakes that were pointed out by eleinasari and quite a number of spelling and grammer mistakes, so it should be a far ...

Will my friend ever get a proper haircut, or just look like a hippie with a bad haircut for the rest of his life?

A good friend of mine who goes by the name sureal showed me this site about a year ago. At the time, I had been to concerned with my school ...

geez, not much that I can say here, since all your mistakes have been bascially covered. Of course, i'm not exactly complaining. Anyway, for the mistakes that haven't been mentioned ...

Very nice story. I'll admit, at first it seemed it a little bit shaky, but you seemed to get better the further your story progressed. For example, your puncutation could ...

wow, I didn't expect do get that may responces, i'm definetly going to enjoy working on this site with you guys. And when I do need a critic in the ...

Hello, i'm the hunter111, or just the hunter for short. You could also call me David if you want, as it is my real name after all. Anyway, it was ...