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Fantastic poem, it really brings to reality the subject of loneliness and it is all totally true! I love the fact that you compared it to sex too, and it ...

Hey, thank you very much for the feedback :-) and thanks for the comments hehe

Amazing poem! I especially love the line: She was beauty and he the beast, they were destined to fall It's such a beautiful, encapturing line! Well done on this poem. ...

This poem is great, it's doing more showing than telling, so you can really imagine it. And there's no cliches in there, which is unusual but brilliant! Great peom, well ...

Hey, I think this is a good poem and has potential to be great. It really shows the conflicting issue of friends and lovers. But I agree with Galerius, I ...

Hey I'm new to this, but was just wondering if you could give your thoughts on this poem and any comments? Hell Mornings would arise and yet she would not ...