horserider117

THANK YOU SO MUCH! lol i needed someone to reveiw chapter two really bad :smt003

thanks! :smt003 i am going to fix all this stuff sometime lol :lol: :thud: :smt005

thx for the tips! :smt003 i am working my best :thud: lol :lol: i think i am going to have my mom look over my stuff before i post so ...

thanks for all the tips guys :smt003 ! i really need it lol i am not much of a writer :thud: but i came up with this story one day ...

thank you so much! i have lots of grammer problems :thud: and i have a problem with wording somethings lol :lol: thank you i really need as meny tips as ...

i like it :mrgreen: