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Re: Just a Bus Note
If you add more details, then It'll be alright. I like it, it a good true story. Next time just more in it.
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare
It need more detail and scary parts. I would love to read more of it. If you had details.
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Road Taken
This a great story. I like it. It little scary when the driver pull out his pistol at hitchhiker.
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: when a boy loves a ghost Chapter 1
Billy Enslin has been picked on in high school, Billy Enslin used to date Carla Laughs. Billy Enslin was a nerd whom everyone hated and this included girls who gave ...
Nov 25, 2011