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hormello

  • Lyric Poetry Re: To the Star of Ithaka I love

    That was obviously the use of an epigraph you dumb s***. Don't talk down to people if you don't know what you're talking about.

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bloom of the Rose

    truly, with my very limited lit background I cant find much fault with this poem at all! i am extremely impressed, especially at your level of writing at your age. ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: a darker piece

    “The Beast's Appeasement” A simple word a simple phrase could sooth this tempered soul. Instead silence replaces where sympathy should stand. The sympathy is then reversed now from me to ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: what if much of a want was to know?

    “What if much of a want was to know” What if much of a want was to know the work behind the colors of life’s mind refracts from the simple ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Tempest, (think T.S Elliot)

    very well done. I especially like your reference to T.S. Elliot in the first stanza. The nature imagery truly gives me a visual and I can see the action taking ...

    Apr 28, 2009


Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare