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Ok, so this is for my creative writing class. It's not that great so it would help me a lot if you guys could give me a little feedback. -There ...

Aww Muse your so pretty! Ok here goes- My best friends and I...don't ask

First off, did you use spell check? Just curious, because you have a lot of misspelled words. I think this could have a lot of potential, but I think you ...

Hey I agree, it would be easier to read if it was spaced out. Athough, I did read it and I did like it very much. There was a part ...

Yeah, I understand where your coming from, trying to get the emotion across with dialogue. It gets the point across, and I understand like her anger and how mad she ...

I'm really sorry guys that there are so many mistakes. I revised it and hopefully it's better. Truly, Madly, Deeply “We can’t do this guys!” I hurried after my friends ...

Haha sorry guys

Ok, i'm on our speech team at school. I was wondering if anyone knows of a good prose piece that I could possibly look at for next year?

Ok, tell me what you guys think and what I need to work on (which I know is a lot). I have written anything in awhile so here it is... ...

This was very good. I love the description, but i also think that when you are introducing all of the other people maybe you should split it up a little. ...

I really liked this, I think it was wirtten well and had very good dialogue. But I also think the F-word was used a little too much and I think ...