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Hola PaperMoon ! Now it's my turn to post something on yours :D First of all, I like the way you used the old English language to portray the heartbroken ...

Thank you, PaperMoon :D That sentence really doesn't flow well, does it ? I want to create that teenage environment in the story, and not all serious. Maybe I'll rephrase ...

Name: Sabine Elizabeth Blake Age: 16 Grade: 10 Gender: Female Appearance: Short black hair, light blue eyes and a birthmark on her collarbone. She has an average height, and usually ...

Hey Turtle, I'm not a serious NaNoer, but I hope I can give you good advices and critiques on your posts someday. I'm new too, and the people here are ...

Hey Papermoon, I'm new too, so it's kinda weird for me to say this. Anyways, Welcome to YWS ! hahaha I know how it feels to wait for replies on ...

Please comment on this edited version of the prologue. Thanks :D

Thanks for all the reviews ! Dreamwalker - I really appreciate your critique, and you did lots of corrections, too. I'll start working on it right away ! :wink: Windy ...

This is a short novel I'm working on for the term break, just to pass the time. But, I hope I can expand it to a real novel, so don't ...

Heyy ! I love your short story! you wrote it with so detailed description, I can imagine the whole scene. I usually read stories with violence involved in it, but ...

Hi Lucy! I'm Firman, and this is my first review. I'm sorry if it's not too helpful, but I'll try my best. The storyline flowed just fine, and I love ...

Nice to meet you too! :) Ooh SD Mentari, I know some people there, but I haven't seen them recently. Some of them were old friends of mine in primary ...

Hey Windy! Of course I'll take your advice! I take advices from anybody who's willing to share their wisdom with me ahahaha :P Be seeing you around, and expect PMs ...

Thanks for all the positive replies guys! I really appreciate it, and I think I'm gonna like it here in YMS. I finally get to hang out with people who ...

Hey everyone! I just made my account a few days ago, and I didn't know that we have to introduce ourselves here first. Sorry, newbie mistake :p Hi! My name ...