hopelessnewromantic

Yeah it was intentional, I personally think if a poem is too grammar perfect it spoils it a bit, this is because poems aren't men't to be thought through, just ...

You call her a whore, When she just needs to be loved, She will get on her back, For a taste of your love, Don’t you see what you’re doing? ...

As evening falls, We say our good nights, Oblivious to what lurks behind, Behind the seemingly beautiful,starry sky. The genital sigh of a willow branch, As a demon perches, Silent, ...

Oh gosh thank-you! Really, that was such a lovely comment!

Hello, this is great! Although I haven't really got the essential skills to do a word by word review I can give you a few pointers. For example not putting ...

'Hahaha!' It wasn't intended to make anyone unhappy/depressed for sure! but it was intended to be deep and meaningful, so I'll just take that comment as a complement! :) I ...

Hello there! I'm Hopelessnewromantic, new to the site! (although that's probably obvious :s) By joining this site I was thinking that my interest of writing may be noticed, but also ...

Numb, The only thing I feel right now, But is it actually a feeling or a mere assumption? This cold, still darkness that surrounds me, Is this life? Or is ...