hopeispeace

I was going to correct a few errors, but it seems I've been beet to it. That's alright. Less work for me! This is sort of funny in a strange ...

This flows less like poetry and more like prose...Which is ok! It's still pretty good. ~Hopeispeace

My opinion is pretty much the same as the last review. Work on flow . . . seperate into stanzas . . .overall nice :)

OK, so, everyone's a critic :) here goes.. Rain is pitter pattering in different interwoven patterns. This line doesn't flow. the word "different" or "interwoven"...one needs taken out to make ...

Thanks for your comment! First off I'd like to say, thanks for all the green :) Second, I believe I have a thing or two to explain. . . You ...

I absolutly HATE being critical. Especially of written work because I know how it hurts. But I do have a thing or two to say, if I may. (hey, that ...

How am I the first review? This should be flocked with positive comments! Its amazing. I can't honestly think of a better word for it. I love how you describe ...

Let me start by saying this is my favorite poem I have read on this site. As a christian, I am so glad there are people like you, writing poetry ...

I like this poem. It made me laugh and nod my head. Honestly, I agree with EVERYTHING in this poem. But since everyone's a critic, here's a point or two; ...

First off, nice poem. Capatalization is fun. You should try it. And this line; "i cant decide what shall i do" You should either make this two seperate lines, or ...

Thank you kindly for your comment :) . In a nerdy way I feel it important to tell you you are my very first commentor! Congrats! Anyway, Im glad to ...

" Painting a toenail" I believe personally your poem would be much better without this line. Its a bit unnessesary and up untill it, (and after it) the poem flows ...

Ok. For starters nice poem. One thing that bugged me is the many referances of how your emotions have to do with your phyisical body (ex. Skin like latex...which by ...

Looking past the poems structure, its meaning could be confusing. See, Im a Christian. Often we are looked down upon for "hating" gay people. But actually, real Christians dont hate ...

I really like this poem. Its expressive metaphorically and honestly thats how I feel poetry should be. Bravo!!