hopeispeace

I really enjoyed reading this . . . Especially the ending. the way you wrote it made it captivating from start to finish. Bravo!

Its true . It irratates me when people think being straight forward with emotion makes a good poem. It doesnt. At all.

Edgar Allen Poe. Always.

By the way, if I'm listing things and trying to be dramatic, I use seperate sentancess instead of commas, to. Sincerely, Your friend. Fello writer. Reviwer of your work. Hopeispeace.

I love syfy and this is really good! A bit "done before" maybe but thats okay. Bravo!

I hate cliffhangers with a passion.

Darn I wanted this to be a funny poem about a helpless banana.

You have a good basic idea, but you need to make this more origonal. I'm sorry, but honestly just about every little thing in this story is used to death. ...

I must admit a few lines into this poem I switched my "reading voice" to a Johny Depp accent. That may have been the only reason it sounded so amazing.

Contrary to previous comments, I think the line about sunsets makes perfect sence...I dont understand the confusion on this. This is a beautiful poem. It flows nicely and the wording ...

I really really liked this poem! Its very. .well..poetic! The only thing Id have to say is that it doesnt nessesarilly flow very well. Although, the story line is sortof ...

I don't believe in concrete rhyme schemes. . . they take away from the poem its self. :)

Ready for beginnings So we need some endings first. I might be hopeful but it’s hopeless. Surrounded by what I’m trying to hide . . . Paying respects to intelligence ...

Bravo! Great poem, and i know who he is *winkyface.

Wow. This is so good. It's incredable. A little confusing, but really, very captivating . . . Is there a sequal?