honeybee

To me this poem is original and creative. I don't really like the fact that you're comparing with toys though! Then again that's where it's original - not many people ...

Okay now that was really funny :lol:

Hi sis! Yes I'd have to agree that the rhyming is good, but remember when mum first read it out - that was funny!

That piece of poetry was very descriptive.... ... I really enjoyed the bit about the honey bees!

I agree with Skye Demon that this poem is very moving. I also think that it's a good length too.

Here I am in a giant maze. It's so hard to find a way out. I see hope and follow her gaze, to a place I only dream about. The ...

What a sweet poem! It IS short though. Other than that, well done 8)

:D This poem was written by my 9 year old cousin Summer :!: I once had a frog and I pulled off it's legs. I clipped them off with a ...

There was a little postage stamp no bigger than your thumb, but it stuck right to the job until it's work was done. They licked it and they pounded it ...