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Light part 2 She, the Moon The moon. they say, will never care of human thoughts and things they bear. The moon, always there in the sky do nothing but ...

WOW! I'm stunned. That,my friend,is a REAL modern literary piece. I like the imagery, the theme. . .or let me say, the whole piece.

..I'm a newbie, you see, so reviews are highly appreciated..Thank you in advance and enjoy! Light the sun, the moon and the stars Stars appear on velvet sky as those ...

..Thanks,really..I greatly appreciate everything.. ..I first haven't notice the punctuations..sorry!..anyway, I've edited it..I hope it will sounds better.. .. love this site!!.. :)

..Nice!..Wonderful!..I love it..You deserves a round of applause..[claps and people screaming and flowers and you smiling and bowing].. ..I agreed with them..math isn't that bad..it's amazing, really.

..Well, I don't think it is..I don't know, but, is the message a bit not connected with my poem?..

Why do I helps me escape the madness, the melancholia, the panic fear and other kind of stuffs..It's amazing..It's fun..It's sweet..I love writing..It's what I do and if I don't ...

..They're right..Your poem is so transparent that you could see its soul just by reading it..It's so emotional and a bit cheesy, very typical for people walking in the boulevard ...

Ac h ing branches let leaves fall On c old and empty ground Th u s orange-tinted leaves of all En m esh their tears around Da y s of ...

..Three words...NICE, CAPTIVATING and STRANGE!! ..I love it..but can I request something?..Can you add at least one more stanza?.. I really want more!

..they're right.."I'm not good at poetry" or something like that is very inappropriate to place before a good poem..Your poem,like what they've said, is so sweet and natural..But your poem ...

The star A bright star shines above the trees, Above the reach of wind and breeze, I reached but it was far away Among the other stars it lay, It ...

..Thanks..I do appreciate everything.. ..Anyway,to all who've and who'll read this... ..This poem is cryptically made.. have fun finding my message..

Autumn Leaves Aching branches let their leaves fall On cold and empty ground. Thus orange-tinted leaves of all Enmesh their tears around. Days of shedding tears will start, and for ...

Sometimes, I wish I knew how to be a mother, but alas! I must learn the hard way. too..I think it's an adventure, to see your child grow and reach ...