holly_jean16

Thank you! You we're all very helpful. I going to try to take your advice! =]

I have lived a long time. I have seen many things, many wondrous things, and many more terrifying things. I have cursed and been cursed. I have died, and I ...

**As I said above this is a first draft. So please tell what you think and what I need to change. Thank you very much I hope you enjoy. I'll ...

Oh wow. Thanks for all the information. Don't worry about the chatspeak I don't even do that in text messages.

**As I said above this is a first draft. So please tell what you think and what I need to change. Thank you very much I hope you enjoy. I'll ...

I'm going to be honest. I don't get it but I love it. In a way I understand what you trying to say and I really enjoyed this piece. I ...

I loved reading this. If this was published I would buy it in a heart beat. I really liked your despriction "Heat had melted her mascara and it was smeared ...

This is really good. It keeps me wondering whats going to happen next. Your description is also very good. This piece just flows.

Hello, my name is Holly. I enjoy long walks on the beach hand holding in the moon light and kissing under... oh wait this isn't the dating service. Okay, after ...